Narrative Reflection.

I think I did well by narrating the story and painting pictures in people's minds. I think it was a lot easier than dialogue. You can read my narrative right here. I enjoyed writing it and making the plot diagram and editing and revising and peer revisions. I liked revising shoshana's narrative it was very good you can read it here. What do you think I did well on?

I think I could work on putting in more dialogue. I think Putting in dialogue is harder for me because I cant really fit it in. I don't know how to put dialogue in.  Like how to fit it in like if you say and she said... or if you say "  blah blah blah" she said It is just hard for me.

literary essay self reflection

I think I was good at looking deeper into what the connections mean like why losing their mothers was important or why it was important that they were so alike. I think the most fun of easy thing was getting evidence like why i thought that she said that I had to look in the book to see if she actually said they were alot alike. I think the hardest part for me was finding things to support my thesis. I had to find certain part in the book that supported the thesis. like when I said she grew to love her I had to find evidence in the book that that was true.what do you think I was good at and what do you think I was bad at?